Aww thanks! Flash backs are tricky to do. I kept thinking HOW CAN I MAKE THIS MAKE SENSE WITHOUT IT BEING CONFUSING. I hope I pulled it off with least amount of hokeyness. XD
You've done it well. Some people tend to overdo their flashbacks. You choose the right scene that everyone reading can go "Oh, that's why he's angry!" (etc).
I can't even grasp correct scene like that. You've got talent (as if you didn't already know. PSSSHAAAWWW!)
Man, I'm liking this round so so much so far. I feel like we're really getting to see Newt/Raven as character, and it's awesome. Very curious to see what you have in store O:
Thanks! I'm halfway through! Let's hope I can get the rest done on time! @A@ Seriously though I'm glad it seems to be flowing alright so far X) I had to shorten it so much due to time restraints. D:
Okay, now I feel like an idiot because I must have seen the "Newt" that's right below it and somehow attached the first three letters to the end of "my." I'm beginning to think I might be dyslexic, or something.
Kudos!
I can't even grasp correct scene like that. You've got talent (as if you didn't already know. PSSSHAAAWWW!)